The crimson rose


I opened the window tonight

To let you in over soft and mellow moonlight

Climb up, reach me in here, count my sorrows, count your fingers once more

My beloved, I promise that you are the one for me to adore

Save me for this broken machine that we call ”life”

Whisper to me… Every secret hidden inside the deeps of the night… inside the shadows

Take the silent path into the dark… Walk-in and cut the limits of our minds with the silky touch of the knife

A moment of truth for who we are, the last taste of youth for what we were and for our love, the crimson rose…


6 Comments Add yours

  1. mbrazfieldm says:

    que beleza Poeta palavras matavilhosas e magic’s, bravo ✌💓

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    1. lynyo says:

      Obrigado! Você me apoia muito, colega poeta! Estou feliz que você tenha gostado!✌🏾❤️
      It’s got a little “hi” for Janis Joplin in there by the way

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      1. mbrazfieldm says:

        Awesome love her music Bobby McGee is one of my favorites 😊

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      2. lynyo says:

        Oh, nice! Knew you will appreciate it!

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  2. Jessica says:

    Great poem… sad touch as most of the poems but lovely. Last read before I say goodbye for the night.

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    1. lynyo says:

      Goodnight, thank you for reading my dear Milky! And thanks for your beautiful words and support!!

      Liked by 1 person

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