Slow down!

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Slow down!

Slow down with the idyllic shape of us

Let’s at least rejoice in our charade

Let’s understand the shadows underneath this fuzz

Do you like my gothic masquerade?

Don’t throw our present to the ground

Slow down, but not that much…

I will die without your touch

Today is just a cracked dream from the past

A future that we won’t reach, at last

Slow down! I need an excuse for you to stay

At least to cherish you for another day…

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  1. Jessica says:

    Love it. No, I hate you for making it so beautiful. 😍 I feel like I’m watching a classic romantic film.

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    1. lynyo says:

      You are way too kind… And mean! And kind! Thank you for reading it! And the classic film comparison is beautiful and a great honor, thank you!

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      1. Jessica says:

        Ah, don’t complain cariΓ±o, you like the way I’m mean to you. 🀭
        It is a great poem so it a fitting comparison

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      2. lynyo says:

        Hey! What happened about telling secrets?

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      3. Jessica says:

        What secrets? I’m not doing anything wrong, am I? hehe 😏

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      4. lynyo says:

        I think we both know the answer of this one, don’t we, querida? 😏

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      5. Jessica says:

        CariΓ±o, talking in puzzle is not good for my heart! If it breaks and the secrets spilled out, I’ll make you responsible… hohoho ^.^

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      6. lynyo says:

        Well querida, here you are at puzzle of words, so is your call πŸ˜‰

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      7. Jessica says:

        Argh! How do you manage to be mean and adorable? 😡 If only I can reach inside the screen and get you, you’ll be aching on your cheeks right now. Ugh… so here 🏳️ because I’m not ready to spill whatever I’m holding in. 😈

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      8. lynyo says:

        I’m just a copycat from you, querida, but I have to say that I admire the way you have keep your secret both, alive and intriguing… πŸ˜‰πŸ˜€

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      9. Jessica says:

        Copycat? Really? 🧐 You look pretty original to me 😊
        And seriously cariΓ±o, you can tie me up but you’ll never be able to get anything out because I myself is trying to forget whatever the secret is. 😁

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      10. lynyo says:

        Oh! Thanks! Yes I am unique, but I do like to cheat here and there jajaajaj
        Milky you could be trying, but we both know that you remember ever so loudly πŸ˜€πŸ˜

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  2. Jessica says:

    Everyone cheats once in a while. And I guess that’s the secret? Seriously confuse over her cariΓ±o…

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    1. lynyo says:

      Jajaja no, that’s not it hahaha

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      1. Jessica says:

        Hmm… 😏 I think I got it. But I’m keeping it for myself.

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      2. lynyo says:

        Ok! I can respect that! But you will never be sure 😁

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      3. Jessica says:

        Challenge accepted πŸ˜‰

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      4. lynyo says:

        A resolution! Nice!πŸ˜‰

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      5. Jessica says:

        🀭🀭🀭

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      6. lynyo says:

        πŸ˜πŸ˜‰πŸ€«πŸ˜

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