First movement to The Rain (Allegro)

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One by one like the skyline tears

Drops of water, music to my ears

One by one I suffered them

I suffer your absence

Is the ease of your presence

For that love that should remain unspoken and sleep

The one I try to hide in the deep

Like the gathering storm’s morpheme

One by one on this soulful moment

When the tears of joy became prominent

And we don’t have to wonder… No more… Anymore

Drop by drop the rain is gaining strength and becoming more passionate than before…

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  1. Jessica says:

    Rain just have that power… to give lonely comfort, like crying for someone’s pain.

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    1. lynyo says:

      Exactly! But don’t forget the musicality of it! Is really important…
      Thanks for reading

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      1. Jessica says:

        Right… I’m feeling rather lonely so I could use a little bit of that music, it’s rather a peaceful night, not a drop in sight.

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      2. lynyo says:

        But Milky, can’t you listen to your own words? The music is there… Beautiful music, for a beautiful night…

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      3. Jessica says:

        And here I thought I finally got away from that nickname huhuhu 😭 you can be a bit mean sometimes…
        But you’re actually right… hehehe… it’s now 5am. The birds are singing and this vampire is ready to hide in her coffin.
        Goodnight cariΓ±o.

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      4. lynyo says:

        Oh I’m sorry, actually I was trying to be nice, I guess these things happen…
        Have a good night/morning, don’t drink to much blood… Oh, and by the way, I will not stop calling you Milky (now, that’s mean)… At least until I read another one of your books
        Sleep tight querida

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      5. Jessica says:

        Then I’m looking for you to read “Perfectly Imperfect” and hear you calling me Ocean (but then again she turns out to be a man so that’s kind of awkward in sense) πŸ˜„
        Right, I shouldn’t drink so much blood (AKA wine or sangria) before going to bed. It turns my brain to mush and play with my senses. I’m not sure what “backlist” poem I put that stupid (embarrassing comment) but I searched it for many hours to tell you to please please please DELETE IT! But you have so much poem I grew tired of looking for it. But if you ever find it (which I think you’ll understand when you read it) please… I’m begging you, delete it and so sorry… I won’t be drinking blood for a while after this 😭😭😭

        You’re the best! πŸ‘ 😘

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      6. lynyo says:

        Hey! Spoiler alert! Milky you can’t recommend a book and spoiled it on the same line, come on! Jajajaaj see? You really are one of a kind!
        Take it easy, if I ever find it I will delete it… The bad news is that I avoid looking back on a regular basis πŸ˜€

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      7. Jessica says:

        You have my thanks cariΓ±o. πŸ€—

        And what do you mean with I’m one of a kind? For the spoiler? Ha! No, I didn’t spoil anything. The part of him being a boy (later man) is not a secret from the reader, it will be in the blurb. πŸ˜› πŸ˜„ … πŸ€” I think…
        wah did I really just spoil it? 😭

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      8. lynyo says:

        Milky, I don’t have to tell you why are one of a kind, do I? I mean come on!
        Oh! If it is not a secret it is not a spoiler! Good for me!

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      9. Jessica says:

        Hmm… in that case you too is one of a kind, and I won’t tell you why 😝

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      10. lynyo says:

        Oh no! You have to Milky, be good πŸ˜€

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  2. Jessica says:

    😁😁😁

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    1. lynyo says:

      Come on! Be nice to me

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      1. Jessica says:

        Be careful cariño, the more you say that the more I feel like doing some mischief 😈

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      2. lynyo says:

        I’m careful don’t worry, is just that I can’t read the power of conviction here, you know, querida?

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      3. Jessica says:

        🀭 I guess not.
        It’s a bit hard to do some mischief when the person I want to victimize is on the other side of the globe… 😭

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      4. lynyo says:

        I read you Milky! I read you! But, the mind is always so powerful, so you are not near to be safe

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      5. Jessica says:

        Me safe? I think you should be worrying about yourself cariΓ±o. You seem like a gentle guy and you’ll regret it if I get mischievious around you 😏
        Yes, it’s a threat. 😁

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      6. lynyo says:

        Oh! I see, perhaps I’m a pyromaniac, you know what I mean?

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      7. Jessica says:

        Really? I happen to love fire! There beautiful and fascinating.

        Should we play with fire and burn the whole town? 😏

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      8. lynyo says:

        Great!
        Sure Milky! I’m in! Let’s torch the place down!

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      9. Jessica says:

        Correction: “they’re beautiful.” and fire happens to be my element…

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      10. lynyo says:

        Oh! Well I am both a Phoenix and a golden lion so I guess we can burn it down nice and easy

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      11. Jessica says:

        And what if the authorities catches us? Should we burn them too? Hahaha πŸ˜‚ Oh my god, look how my train of thoughts is going… 😨
        You’re a bad influence for me cariΓ±o. πŸ˜‘

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      12. lynyo says:

        Querida, they will never be able to catch us, come on! Are you quitting on me, Milky?πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‰
        Don’t worry, I know you are a good girl!

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      13. Jessica says:

        Thank you cariΓ±o. I’m not quitting… I still love you, so I’m willing to make the city dance in fire with you, it’s just ah… hmm… I’m bit blank right now… haha πŸ˜„ get back to you later 😘

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      14. lynyo says:

        Querida, you had said more than a lot tonight! So we will have to burn it after all!

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      15. Jessica says:

        Haha we will cariΓ±o after I sober up. πŸ˜„

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      16. lynyo says:

        πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

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      17. Jessica says:

        All sobered! Haha πŸ˜€ Before we commit that crime though I decided to pester you with a blog award. You’re the only one I nominate so you can’t turn me down on this one cariΓ±o… 😁
        https://jessicaelarsen.com/okay-lets-do-this/

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      18. lynyo says:

        Hey! Thanks for the nomination! I will get into it as soon as I can!
        I guess I’ll put the torches aside for a while πŸ˜€

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      19. Jessica says:

        Hehehe πŸ˜„ I can actually picture you putting the torches aside. Quite charming I must say. Hehe

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      20. lynyo says:

        Jajajaaj aside but never off, Milky! Jajaja I picture you smiling meanwhile…

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      21. Jessica says:

        You’re the man cariΓ±o! Yeah, just hold on to that. We’ll burn this shitty world when the time comes. Hopefully, it will be a better place for us afterward… sigh πŸ™‚ what a dream

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      22. lynyo says:

        Querida, some dreams are meant to come true, so I will hold them and later we will watch this burn! Perhaps we should be more selective, somethings are still worth it

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      23. Jessica says:

        Happy to hear that cariΓ±o, ❀ it means that you’re not losing hope as much as I thought. πŸ˜„

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      24. lynyo says:

        Am I? Perhaps you are lost on a other puzzle of words… You have to be more careful, querida jajaja kidding

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      25. Jessica says:

        Perhaps hahaha 😁 but I’ll hold on to hope and try to do a good job of pulling you in.
        Or maybe I just need breakfast. Woke up 3pm πŸ˜‚
        Later cariΓ±o πŸ™‹ 😘

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      26. lynyo says:

        Have a good one! ❀️

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