Intergalactic fade out

on

Can you take my confessions all the way to Mars?

Leave them there, to burn on the red sky

Flowers of fire torching distant ambiguities

Black rose, white rose, growing galaxies

Can you take my love all the way back to Pluto?

Leave it there, to freeze with dusty air

Stone cold edges of pain, cracking my veins

The beauty of love out of the constellation’s glow

Can you take my life all the way into the sun?

I won’t turn out, I won’t be hasty

I will despair without hostility

Without remorse or culpability

Can you take what is left of me?

Away on your next trip

Take me with you

All the way

Far away

Today…

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7 Comments Add yours

  1. Wow this is so lovely!❤

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    1. lynyo says:

      Thank you so much! I really appreciate your comment! Thanks for reading!😃❤️

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  2. Brilliant. My favourite lines were: Stone cold edges of pain, cracking my veins…. Love the intergalactic metaphors.

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    1. lynyo says:

      Thank you so much for reading! I’m honored that you liked! I hope you find some more things to like here!

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      1. I haven’t been following your posts for very long, but I have found lots of things to like in what I have seen.

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      2. lynyo says:

        Thank you! I’m so glad about that! It makes it all worthy and I hope that you will always find something here that makes you feel or thing, that you may like or hate! Thanks once more for all your kindness

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      3. You’re very welcome

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