Make a wish

How would I like to write something nice
Poetry of the magnificent kind
With pristine words and charming thoughts
With perfect symmetry between beauty and darkness

How I wish I could be the king of emotions
And make you believe in the words of hope
So no one could take me from you
Amongst the lines of passion, I would have shown you love

If one day you have a wish to spare
Think of me first
Wish for me to become a poet
Because all my words will become yours with absolute purity and love.


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  1. Oh, this is so good, I love this. I always feel the same when it comes to writing, how I always want to be better, to excel at this.

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    1. lynyo says:

      I know right? I’m my case sometimes it turns to be really hard…

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      1. A lot of your work is great, don’t doubt yourself too much


      2. lynyo says:

        I won’t! Thanks for the advice it means a lot!!

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      3. I mean it, the more you doubt yourself, the less you’ll find yourself writing, and if it’s something you genuinely find yourself wanting to pursue, you don’t want to stray from it. Take it from someone who learned the hard way ๐Ÿ™‚

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      4. lynyo says:

        I totally get you! I guess I will always find myself in doubt because it’s who I am, but I understand that I have to keep trying every single day. A teacher of mine once told me that a great novelist once said: “There are 3 rules for been a good writer, 1)Read the classics, 2) Know what your contemporaries are doing 3) Write every day”
        It’s kind of my mantra to me now. Cause I used to be better when I was younger but then, I restrained my self for writing and lost something in the way… Thanks for you presious words! And I’ll keep it in mind!!!

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      5. Those are some powerful words to live by. I usually stick by Langston Hughes, Dreams and Harlem, both meanings are if you let your dream falter, it becomes unusable, and there’s no good in that.


      6. lynyo says:

        Oh that’s deep!! And true!! And also hard to keep up!!

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      7. ๐Ÿ˜‰ Who ever said it would be easy?

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      8. lynyo says:

        Sometimes easy also means worthless ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      9. Very true, if it were easy, everyone would do it

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